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April 21, 2009
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:iconeuclidstriangle:
Aptly named, I know. I'm so clever.

Soooo this was interesting. Not really sure what I think of it, to be honest. I think I'm getting better at bird heads. At least bird heads in profile. :XD:

It's rather basic, technique-wise. Hm.

Marker on bristol board and some white out.
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:iconamyjiao:
It's a beautiful drawing. The composition works well and you've filled with page will.

A few things to consider:
-Your mark making is on the messy side, a little bit more unity might help it become a little less busy.
-I see pink and purple splashed here and there which is good, you should bring the blue into the feather as well. not a lot, but a little more than what you have right now. That way the body of the bird is not separated from the tail of the bird
-It seems like you've put equal attention on all parts of the drawing, not a terrible thing, but you're lacking a definite focus point. Perhaps a little less mark making and a tad bit more color filling towards the back might help.

Still, over-all it's a pretty good piece. Keep up the good work!
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*RoseCarballeira Aug 20, 2010  Professional General Artist
The detail and texture are incredible, and I'm really digging the composition.
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:iconeuclidstriangle:
Glad to hear! :D This was a different experience for me, drawing a peacock. lol.
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*eProductSales Jun 16, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Gorgeous work on this--love the details and the brilliant color! :hug:
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:iconburrlottie:
I love his smile!
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:iconjgunner:
I like how the white-out gave it a very shiny look.
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=BurningArtist Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Such beautiful colors love!! And I really love the shine of the neck of the bird! I hate birds (and they hate me) but I definitely love this! :heart:
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:iconeuclidstriangle:
Thank you! :D

(Yeeah... I had parakeets... ONCE. Never again... ._. )
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