Soooo this was interesting. Not really sure what I think of it, to be honest. I think I'm getting better at bird heads. At least bird heads in profile.
It's a beautiful drawing. The composition works well and you've filled with page will.
A few things to consider: -Your mark making is on the messy side, a little bit more unity might help it become a little less busy. -I see pink and purple splashed here and there which is good, you should bring the blue into the feather as well. not a lot, but a little more than what you have right now. That way the body of the bird is not separated from the tail of the bird -It seems like you've put equal attention on all parts of the drawing, not a terrible thing, but you're lacking a definite focus point. Perhaps a little less mark making and a tad bit more color filling towards the back might help.
Still, over-all it's a pretty good piece. Keep up the good work!
A few things to consider:
-Your mark making is on the messy side, a little bit more unity might help it become a little less busy.
-I see pink and purple splashed here and there which is good, you should bring the blue into the feather as well. not a lot, but a little more than what you have right now. That way the body of the bird is not separated from the tail of the bird
-It seems like you've put equal attention on all parts of the drawing, not a terrible thing, but you're lacking a definite focus point. Perhaps a little less mark making and a tad bit more color filling towards the back might help.
Still, over-all it's a pretty good piece. Keep up the good work!
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